Rough Cut

After a long period of editing and fianlising our we the rought cut turned out to have more potential than we as a group we thought it would however, progress was very much sucessful.

Here is some constructive critism made by students and media staff:


"Music and titles worked well together. Opening credits were too long compared to the film." -Sophie

"Really good. The soundtrack went with the voice over because it was jolly. The echo could be heard during the voice over." -Josephine

"The target audience was made apparent. You could have included speech bubbles for when she said "OMG" The camera angles were excellent but re-do the voice over and lower the music during some points." -Miss Goulds

"Instead of walking down the stairs, there should be a group of people laughing together and then Lisa walking alone." -Myrin